Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Introductory Paragraph
Abraham Lincoln once said "The best thing about the future is that it comes one day at a time." This means that time never stops and it goes by day by day. I agree because the best thing about the future is that it comes day by day but you don't really know what tomorrow will bring. This can be clearly seen in the first chapter of The Last Universe because nobody expected Suzan brother to be in a wheel chair, but one day it happened. In the book The Last Universe Suzan was scared of the garden in the backyard, but not no more, she really didn't talk to her brother but now they are best friends, and she used to be scared of a lot of things but she has matured, time really changes things.
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Rigo you start good on your quote sentence. all sentences follow the correct sequence and structure except in this sentence, I agree because the best thing about the future it that it comes day by day but you don't really know what tomorrow will bring. try to said this quote is true or something. don't start with an I if its not a paragraph about you. also check commas and punctuation. great start rigo.
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